scroll to top
Stuck on your essay?
Get ideas from this essay and see how your work stacks up
Word Count: 860
I was born and raised in Vietnam and I now immigrate to America I lived in two different places but this country changed my personality as much as I could feel I am the last child in my family so Ive received most of love from them When I lived in Vietnam I didnt have to do anything in my house my mom and sisters did all Everything which I wanted to do I had to ask my mom even if I was over eighteen At that time I didnt know I had to be independent by myself as American teenager In America when people turn into eighteen they can decide what they want what they do In 2011 I came to USA and my difficult life began I was in Minnesota for five months and then move to Seattle It was in winter so it was very cold like I was in the freezer when I went outside In Minnesota snow fell such much that I couldnt see the scene there Everywhere was covered in white The view made me think how hard how sad my life would beThe first two months my sister guided me acquainted with new language new custom and new life It was hard time that I could admit Next months my brother-in-law tried to teach me driving when he had free time but it was just twice a month I still felt okay because my sister and her husband could help me and explain my questions about foreign life They were along my side Before I left their house to move to Seattle they gave me advice They said If you want to do something or discover something you just do it Dont be afraid Because you are an independent confident girl you should face with challenges in your life That will make you more successful in the future In fact something changed when I moved to
@Kibin is a lifesaver for my essay right now!!
- Sandra Slivka, student @ UC Berkeley
Wow, this is the best essay help I've ever received!
- Camvu Pham, student @ U of M
If I'd known about @Kibin in college, I would have gotten much more sleep
- Jen Soust, alumni @ UCLA