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Narrative Buying a New Car One afternoon on a cold December day I was driving out to work and started to notice steam rising from the hood I pulled into a small parking lot to see what was wrong I popped the hood and then proceeded to loosen the radiator cap a little bit to relieve some of the pressure The cap apparently wasnt on tight in the first place so when I went to loosen it it just shot right off The antifreeze was all over the hood the side of the car my shirt and in my face - Yuck This I got it in my mouth I cant see Yuck After the antifreeze was cleared from my eyes I dove home to call in and say that I would be late With a shower and a change of clothes I went to work After punching out I headed to a mechanic - The car was over heating and when I went to loosen the cap it popped - Okay Ill run a test on it as soon as it cools down a little A few minutes later - Well the fluid in this little tester should be green but its yellow That means that gas has gotten into the antifreeze Ill keep it over night and call you about it tomorrow I then got a ride home form a friend The next day Brett called back and gave me the results - Well I hate tot tell you this but the head is blown Itll cost somewhere around 700 to replace the head - Forget it the cars not worth it Ill just get a new car Again my fiend helped me out He was nice enough to be my chauffeur for the day After work he dove me out to look at cars I went out to David A Deebs Auto and Truck Sales He has a nice
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