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Cancel Culture: Who it Hurts, Why it is Damaging, and What Should Be Done to Stop it

This is an essay about cancel culture. The author highlights the impact that cancel culture has on celebrities and other entities on social media platforms such as Instagram and Tik-Tok. In addition, the author discusses the concepts of being politically progressive, emotional turmoil, freedom of expression, and cyberbullying.
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"Overall, your paper is off to an excellent start. Doing a little bit of work on various aspects of the paper will bring a significant amount of clarity to the paper and make it that much stronger. While you have an introduction that ends with a thesis statement, I recommend that you elaborate on it to make it clear to the reader that it guides the paper. A way to elaborate on the thesis statement is to hint at the points you are going to make in the body of the paper.

Also, the purpose of your essay is a bit muddled because your running head and the title do not align with your title page, and a reader cannot find the terminology used in your running head and title in the body of the paper. To make the piece feel well-rounded, use the conclusion as an opportunity to summarize the main points that you made in the body of the document and relate them to your thesis statement. You mentioned that your paper is supposed to be APA formatted. However, numerous spacing, citation, and heading formats do not align with this. Last, overall, you have a decent command of grammar, sentence structure, and punctuation. I would advise either reading your paper out loud or having someone else read through it for you to resolve these types of errors."

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