scroll to top
Stuck on your essay?
Get ideas from this essay and see how your work stacks up
Word Count: 338
I went to a party mom I remembered what you said You told me not to drink Mom so I drank soda instead I really felt proud inside Mom the way you said I would I didnt drink and drive Mom even though the others said I should I know I did the right thing Mom I know you were always right Now the party is finally ending Mom as everyone is driving out of sight I got into my car Mom but as I pulled out into the road the other car didnt see me Mom and now Im the one who will pay Im lying here dying Mom I wish youd get here soon How cold this happen to me Mom My life just burst like a balloon There is blood all around me Mom and most of it is mine I hear the medic say Mom Ill die in a short time I just wanted to tell you Mom I swear I didnt drink It was the others Mom The others didnt think He was probably in the same party as I The only difference is he drank and I will die Why do people drink Mom It can ruin your whole life Im feeling sharp pains now Pains just like a knife The guy who hit me is walking Mom and I dont think its fair Im lying here dying and all he can do is stare Tell my brother not to cry Mom Tell Daddy to be brave And when I go to heaven Mom put Daddys Girl on my grave Someone should have told him Mom not to drink and drive If only they had told him Mom I would still be alive My breath is getting shorter Mom Im becoming very scared Please dont cry for me MomWhen I needed you you were always there
@Kibin is a lifesaver for my essay right now!!
- Sandra Slivka, student @ UC Berkeley
Wow, this is the best essay help I've ever received!
- Camvu Pham, student @ U of M
If I'd known about @Kibin in college, I would have gotten much more sleep
- Jen Soust, alumni @ UCLA