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Case Study: The Market for High Velocity Oxygen Fuel (HVOF)

In this market case study, the student discusses the current and future market for high velocity oxygen fuel (HVOF) by examining its current state and applications and expected future growth. The student also discusses several companies with the capacity to work with HVOF.
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Crystal's feedback:

"You give a pretty solid basic overview of the HVOF market, current and future, with concrete examples of companies. However, consider introducing HVOF in a short intro (preceding your current content) ending with a thesis statement that lays out the scope and purpose of your paper (hint: what you cover in the three paragraphs). A short conclusion with a broad takeaway that encompasses why everything you covered about HVOF is important and/or useful in some broader context would also strengthen the essay structure. You incorporate a ton of great info about the current HVOF market and applications, as well as the future outlook, but also make sure to cite the sources used. Finally, I highly recommend a heavy edit to improve sentence structures, grammar, punctuation, and transitioning, as there are many run-on sentences (e.g., the first paragraph is one super-long sentence), punctuation errors, a lack of transitions--all of which greatly hurt readability."

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