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The Inevitability of the American Revolution

This essay on the causes of the American Revolution identifies tensions arising after the Seven Years War, the impact of Enlightenment ideas on American thinkers and leaders, and a series of Parliamentary acts exacerbating the situation.
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Bridget's feedback:

"This is an impressive essay. You show excellent control over the higher-order concerns of organization and structure, and you supplement the broader currents of the thesis with well-chosen historical details. Before any final submission, use a thorough proofread to catch occasional errors. These include dropped words ("two of the most known pieces of...") and other minor issues that don't necessarily cause clarity problems but can impact ethos. I also see opportunities to refine the writing, such as at the top of page 4 when you define boycotts--decide if your reader really needs that information and, if so, consider incorporating the definition into the previous sentence to keep things moving.

Finally, I caution against the use of counterfactual or a "what if" to conclude your paper--this would entail another discussion regarding the stakes for both sides. Instead, use the information you've positively explored in the body of the essay to make your final point."

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