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For years I had begged my mom to take my family to Disney World But every time she took the time to look into it something always got in the way It felt like I would never get to go there again Then on my 15th birthday school was conveniently let out for three days and my mom had vacation days stored up She asked if for my birthday I wanted to finally take that trip to Disney World My dad and brother could not get time off to go with us and I would miss my first Homecoming dance but I would never pass up this opportunity So we boarded the plane on a Thursday morning and headed towards the place where dreams come trueDisney World was amazing from the moment we drove through the entrance I had been there a few times before and yet I still was in awe We checked into the hotel room as fast as possible and charged to where the busses picked us up for the parks Where do you want to go first Arin my mom asked me when we reached the busses There was a bus for each park and we needed to make a quick decision because the bus for Animal Kingdom was about to leaveLets go to Animal Kingdom mom I replied That is my favorite park I think that is the best choice since today is your birthday We should spend the day at the park you love the most When we got to the park we were beyond excited As we walked into the park entrance my mom gave me a pin to put on my shirt It had Its My Birthday written on it so everyone would know that was the reason for the trip Of course I was secretly hoping that I would get special privileges because of it and like the slogan says my dream came true As I
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