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Kibin. (2023). Censorship is unacceptable. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/censorship-is-unacceptable-njFhXDIF
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"Your stance on the topic of censorship comes through, and the basic premise for each of your body paragraphs makes sense. Your first body paragraph would be stronger, though, if you discussed censorship of materials or information in general, not just in terms of viewing something. Since you talk about censorship in journalism and books, freedom to read a variety of materials is important too. Your argument in the third body paragraph needs more development. If you think that parents should spend more time talking to their kids about sensitive topics instead of relying on censorship, then this is a point you should explicitly state for the reader's understanding. Book titles should be italicized, not placed in quotation marks. Run-on sentences should be recast to flesh out your statements and clarify your writing. There are various minor errors such as your use of "however" followed by a semicolon. In terms of formatting, your title should be centered using your software program's centering tool, and a final check should be done to ensure any extra spaces, such as the one between the opening quotation mark and the word "More," are deleted."
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(Kibin, 2023)
Reference list entry:
Kibin. (2023). Censorship is unacceptable. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/censorship-is-unacceptable-njFhXDIF
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("Censorship Is Unacceptable.")
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"Censorship Is Unacceptable." Kibin, 2023, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/censorship-is-unacceptable-njFhXDIF
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1. "Censorship Is Unacceptable." Kibin, 2023. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/censorship-is-unacceptable-njFhXDIF.
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"Censorship Is Unacceptable." Kibin, 2023. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/censorship-is-unacceptable-njFhXDIF.
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