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It was a jolly time for me here With almost the whole school beingmy friend I was a standout always recognized by everyone There wasonly one thing that was troubling me I wouldnt exactly say troublingme but it meant trouble for most of the kids my age Grades the only thing I needed and you might be wondering why Imnot in trouble with my parents so heres the answer They didnt know Inever told them and they trusted me but Im pretty sure the secret wontlast for long Ive always been an excellent daughter with the highestgrades you could get but that changed ever since I got into trouble withpopularity in 4th grade I gave my first report card an everlasting stare shaken up toknow that I failed in three whole classes The three humongous 50s formath science and language arts sat on me until I was as flat as apancake My parents didnt feel any better than I did My mom lookedlike a thunder storm ready to explode and my dad was breathing fireEver since that day I went back to my normal self studying or reading247 From what you have seen it might be clear for you now that peoplecan change over time I have changed more than once and I am quitecertain that I will continue to change again and again
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