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08-25-03 Choose and Lose It was a bright sunny afternoon in Mandarin South Carolina when the Johnsons pulled into the driveway of their new house Jennifer who turns 17 in two months was anxious to start school and to start a new life for herself Her little brother Matthew had been annoying her for the last 5 hours as they drove from Dalton Georgia Dan Jennifers father finally had to ground Matthew before he would calm down Mr Johnson worked as a realtor for the government and was asked to help head up the South Carolina division Linda Johnson Jennifers mother was the webmaster for the CBL Corporation and enjoyed moving around from time to time They were all glad to be here and started to settle down immediately You wouldnt exactly call Jennifer a geek but she always had the best grades and never got into any trouble Sports werent really her thing and she turned to reading to sooth her often uneasy mind Along with her gift for academics came a lack of social skills It usually took Jennifer a few weeks to develop new friends Her appearance wasnt very favorable and the thick glasses she wore just made her look like an alien Sara and Jessica were the only two friends that Jennifer really had She wished she didnt have to leave them back in Georgia but she also desired the chance to start over in a new place She was going to make an excellent impression with everyone and was going to try many new things With two days left until the start of school Jennifer experimented with her image and tried to find a look that suited her She also tried to change her attitude a little so that she could be more rounded Her biggest problem by far was her self-confidence She couldnt just go up to someone and introduce herself nor could she even manage to speak properly
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