Christians of Dating Age Should Not Date Non-Believers in College
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"You have started your essay with a strong introduction that ends with a clear thesis statement. You then go on to present your evidence in an order that is logical and aligns with the thesis statement. From the tone of writing it is unclear as to whether this is supposed to be a factual piece of an opinion piece. If this is supposed to be a factual piece, and you have obtained facts and perspectives from other sources, there is a need for citations throughout the document. There are a number of grammar and sentence structure errors that can be found throughout the essay, most of which do not impact the readability of the essay. There are also a few confusing word choice errors. The most noticeable is your consistent use of the phrase, "Christians of a dating age in college...". This phrasing suggests that there are Christians in college who are not of dating age which leads to some confusion because it would seem that all college students are of dating age. "
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