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Kibin. (2024). Considerations for colleges and universities. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/college-university-comparison-ZjV0GmWr
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"You make many valid comparisons of the differences between attending a university and a community college, but your essay would benefit from some reorganization so that your body paragraphs tackle different supporting points or key ideas. For example, your body paragraphs could be arranged to cover differences in academic life, extracurricular activities, and housing options. In terms of writing conventions, words such as “university” and “community” should not be capitalized when used in a generic manner. Questions should end with a question mark instead of a period, and there are some word choice problems as seen with the use of “strands.” The use of terms such as “decide” and “decision” in the same statement makes your writing repetitive, so when possible, synonyms should be used to vary your vocabulary."
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Kibin. (2024). Considerations for colleges and universities. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/college-university-comparison-ZjV0GmWr
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