Comparing and Contrasting Martin Luther King Jr. and Malcolm X
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"You do a good job of contrasting Malcolm X and Martin Luther King Jr., and you provide many different quotes to support your analysis. But structurally, your essay would make more sense if you rearranged a few of your body paragraphs so that you fully discuss the men’s upbringings before transitioning into analysis of their speeches since most of your essay is focused on their involvement with the U.S. civil rights movement. Also, note that when you have a parenthetical citation associated with a statement, the end punctuation (typically a period) goes after the citation itself, not before the closing quotation mark. Review is needed to ensure that you have complete sets of opening and closing parentheses for such citations. After a notable figure has been introduced by first and last name, the person should be referred to by last name only. Moreover, you should consistently use either “black” or “African American” instead of a mix of the two."
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