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Comparing My Life to the Life of Kimsey, a Cambodian Girl

This essay provides an understanding of the differences between the writer and Kimsey, a Cambodian girl. The author describes Kimsey's experiences as vastly different from her own and looks at how Kimsey feels unloved and must provide for her family.
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Christina's feedback:

"Well done providing information about the comparison and contrast between yourself and Kimsey. You provide great details about the differences between your life and Kimsey's life, but most of the actual comparison only happens in your topic sentences. The essay tends to focus more on Kimsey and her experience and less on your own. That's okay if this essay is supposed to focus on Kimsey, but it might help to provide some balance in your descriptions of Kimsey and your own experience. For instance, your paragraphs do a great job focusing on one aspect of Kimsey's life that is different from yours, but consider explaining how those differences appear in your own life. There are also a handful of grammar and spelling errors that could be resolved to make the essay even stronger."

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