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Comparing the Different Types of Love Described in Two Poems

In this compare and contrast essay, a student compares the poems "Love and Marriage" and "Do You Love Me" and the different types of love -- storge love and eros -- the two poems convey.
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Erin's feedback:

"You have a good introduction and provide some interesting background information on different types of love, which helps the reader understand your analysis later on. The transitions between your paragraphs could use a little work; sometimes, your closing sentence in a paragraph would make a better topic sentence for the next paragraph. While it's okay to hint at the paragraph that comes next, you don't want to be too heavy-handed about it, or else you break up your content in a confusing way. Finally, there are quite a few grammar, sentence structure, and capitalization errors in your writing, and they sometimes make it hard to determine what you mean to say (for instance, "filling" instead of "feeling"). I would recommend having your paper proofread to correct these issues so that your ideas shine through."

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