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Kibin. (2023). How animal farm mirrors the russian revolution. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/comparison-of-animal-farm-by-george-orwell-to-the-russian-revolution-ITmKA8c6
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Bob's feedback:
"You've done a great job of identifying the parallels between the characters in the novel and actual historical figures. Your conclusion hints at other possible parallels and this would be an interesting aspect to explore. If you're not going to examine these other connections, though, it might be a good idea to leave that thought out as it's an awkward note to end on without support.
You mention the different types of citizens that the animals represent but don't go into much detail about how their historical counterparts affected Russian history. Consider expanding upon this.
Make sure to refer to events in the novel in the present tense. This is common practice, and it will also help your reader differentiate between actions in the novel and historical events (which will be in the past tense)."
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Kibin. (2023). How animal farm mirrors the russian revolution. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/comparison-of-animal-farm-by-george-orwell-to-the-russian-revolution-ITmKA8c6
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("How Animal Farm Mirrors the Russian Revolution.")
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"How Animal Farm Mirrors the Russian Revolution." Kibin, 2023, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/comparison-of-animal-farm-by-george-orwell-to-the-russian-revolution-ITmKA8c6
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1. "How Animal Farm Mirrors the Russian Revolution." Kibin, 2023. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/comparison-of-animal-farm-by-george-orwell-to-the-russian-revolution-ITmKA8c6.
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