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Comparison of City and Countryside Life

In this compare and contrast essay, a student discusses the differences between city and countryside life. The student covers the topics of career opportunities, education, finances, pollution, and transportation.
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Angela's feedback:

"You make many valid comparisons between city and countryside life, but some of your points are questionable. For example, it’s not strictly true that education and job opportunities are better in the countryside. Rural education is often plagued with a lack of access to resources such as the internet, and the countryside tends to have less variety than a city when it comes to the kinds of jobs that are available. The sentence that begins “In a city, pollution” is an example of a run-on sentence that should be recast for clarity. There are also problems with the wrong form of a word being used (e.g., “priced” instead of “pricey”). Review is needed to ensure the beginning of each sentence has been capitalized, and while you maintain a consistent format for paragraphs throughout the work, the paper would look neater if you reduced the size of the blank spaces inserted between paragraphs."

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