A Comparison of Taoism and Buddhism
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"You provide a thorough explanation of Taoism’s and Buddhism’s basic tenets, and you also do a good job of comparing the two religions. However, your paragraphs are quite short, which leads to an overall choppy flow for your essay. Thus, some reorganization should be done to combine various paragraphs with the aim of creating new paragraphs that are half a page to three-quarters of a page in length. It would be a good idea to apply some special formatting to your headings so that they are easier to distinguish from the surrounding text. Revision is also needed in the formatting of block quotes. The title of a book should be italicized, and your essay would look neater overall if quotation marks were formatted in curly instead of straight style."
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