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Conceptual Relevance and Narrative as Documentary Film Techniques

In two short responses, the student evaluates and critiques their documentary term project, applying lenses of conceptual relevance and narrativity.
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"You respond directly to each question with a focused discussion that moves efficiently through the argumentation, and your presentation of the information, vocabulary, and sources shows mastery of the topic. My main recommendations are in cleaning up lower-order concerns so the responses are polished on every level. Make sure to properly punctuate around the parenthetical citations, with periods coming after the closing parentheses. I also spot occasional issues like comma splices and some bumpy syntax that can impact clarity; to facilitate your reader's comprehension and attention, use a careful proofread to catch those."

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