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Conclusion of a Case Study in Child Development

This paper summarizes observations on the development of a girl in grade school.
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Jim's feedback:

"This is a good summary of the child’s development, but I have a few suggestions to improve it. It is good practice to avoid informal language such as “a lot.” I don’t understand what you mean by “extravagant things.” Use an en dash (–) to write a range of numbers. You can write this with character code on a PC or as option-dash on a Macintosh. Elements of a list should have the same format. You write a list with “shows,” “has,” “she has,” and “has.” You need to change the form of the third element to match the others. You describe a task first as “liquid of conservation” and then as “conservation of liquid.” You say she “analyzes” and “use.” The second verb is incorrect. You say she was unable to do an area of development. I do not think people “do” an area of development. You might instead say there was an area at which she was unsuccessful. Consider running a grammar check to find grammatical issues that require improvement."

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