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Concussions and Subconcussive Blows: A Crisis in the Making

This essay discusses the dangers of concussions and subconcussive blows. The writer focuses on the frequency of head injuries in football and the need to better protect players from impact and long-term complications.
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"Your purpose in this paper is clear. Your point of view on concussions and why subconcussive blows are the most dangerous is adequately supported by the references from the literature. To strengthen this paper, please elaborate on the negative outcomes caused by subconcussive blows. You should also create a stronger conclusion that encompasses all of the main ideas and key insights presented in the body of the paper. There seems to be some inconsistencies in the way MLA style is being applied. Kibin has some great free resources on MLA style. This paper would benefit from a round of editing."

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