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Core Values of Success in the United States Air Force

This admission essay is about core values, what they mean to the writer, and how they align with Air Force values.
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Christina's feedback:

"Well done ensuring you gave very good information to the reader, educating them of thoughtful reasoning and ideas for your core values. Areas of focus would include the purpose statement in the first paragraph. You want to be sure it is directly stated for the reader. This enables them to know what you will discuss within the paper. You also want to be sure that for organization, you are giving both a detailed introduction and conclusion, as the introduction gives an overview of what you will be writing about in the body paragraphs, and the conclusion lets the reader know what they should be taking away from your paper. With formatting, a review of Harvard style would be beneficial in order to ensure different parts are correct, such as the reference page, page number, cover page, title page, and in-text citations. Also, a solid round of proofreading would benefit you to ensure your work is ready for submission by correcting things like punctuation, grammar, and sentence structure."

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