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What ever it is in another moment Ill be flying free either way whatever he doesIll be soaring I cant belive it My dad realy just suffocated meMy seizure is now over but i dont feel like myselfIm looking over my bodyI think I found my true death but i didnt hurt like I thought it wouldI know my family loves me altthough I wish they could know im the real meMy tears are runnng down my face and i actually feel itI didnt want to die all my life my family didnt know the smart side of meI just wanted them to hear me but now Im dead and they will never get to know meMy dad should have never killed meWell If I look on the bright side now Im a soulNow at least I can try to talk to my mom and tell her Im smart underneath all of thisPaul and Cindy are finally going to get to see Im not just some vegetableMaybe its a good thing Im deadSo time moves on its now 2011Cindy and Paul still miss me so muchCindy always brings my name up any where she goesPaul doesnt like to talk about meActuallyPaul hates hearing my namePaul hurts because the day that he found me deadPaul went crazy and pulled out a knife on my dad I couldnt blame himMy dad killed himself shortly after I diedWell now things are starting to get betterFinally my mom cleaned my room She got ride of my big goofy cribAt least shes moving onSometimes I see her crying at night all aloneSince Cindy and Paul moved outI feel terrible I wish I could just give her a hugMy life shouldnt had ended so fastMy mom doesnt deserve to have her son and husband deadNow my family is such a desaster I feel terrible for all this painMy last wish would be to just make my family feel better
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