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Its been over three years since I saw my dad He left a month after my mom passed away leaving my sister and me with my grandma When I saw him at my house along with the cops I knew something had to be terribly wrong The cop that approached me explained that my grandma was driving my sister to her friends house when they were hit by a speeding car My grandma was killed instantly but my sister wasnt found At that moment everything that I cared for most in the world was taken from me My world was on the brink of collapsing so thats when I knew I had to find my sister No one knew her like I did and whatever the reason for her disappearance she would find a way to help me find her I felt a pull to the place where the crash occurred and went to see if there was anything that could lead me to her Before I was able to go to the crash site my dad grabbed my arm and tried to talk to me about my new living arrangements He had arranged for me to live with my aunt who lived three miles away He on the other hand would be unable to take care of me because his wife needed him Even though I had not seen him in years all he had to say to me was I was going to live with my aunt and his wife needed him I wasnt surprised that he wouldnt be sticking around but I only wish he would show more emotion for my sake even if he had to fake it I had two hours to pack everything I would need before we left but I had other plans in mind When my dad was busy talking to the police I made my way to my beach cruiser in the garage and rode down
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