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It started out liked any other Wednesday I went to work I went to school and then I did my homework but this Wednesday was very different It was 1100 pm and I was headed to bed when I got a call from my brother John Hey we have a big problem John said I asked if it could wait until tomorrow but he said No Nothing could have prepared me for what he told me I will be right over John hang on do not touch anything and call the police No he said John explained that it has to be at least 48 hours before theyll open up a case I said Ok just hang on and I will see you soonThirty minutes later I arrived and ran into the house there was glass everywhere I asked John what happened I dont know John said I came home from basketball and it was like this Our car was gone and in its place was this note Robert and John you have 24 hours to pay two hundred thousand dollars or you parents and your little brother will die Call us when you have the money but the second we see a cop we kill all three of themNumber 801-555-2324I was so scared how were we going to get the money I realized that there was only one way out of this mess We were going to have to fight back As I explained my idea to John he screamed Are you insane Robert Theyll kill us I look at John and asked him if he was that stupid Theyll try to kill us either way but at least well have a chance a fighting chance It might be Mom Dad and Sams only chanceI told John to get our Dads rifle in the basement I went and got Moms Saturday Night Special from
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