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Broke and in desperate need of money I decided to take matters into my own hands I tried working odd and in jobs but I could never get hired full-time My resume was immaculate and I had an ample amount of short-hand work experience but I was horrendous at interviews The employer would see me as inadequate and I would not get the job that I desperately needed to maintain a normal lifeSeveral months later I lost my house my dog my car and most of my clothes all I had was my guns I did not have any family that I knew I was abandoned when I was a mere 5 years old I also did not have any friends because I always had to fend for myself and did not have time to make acquaintances so I was living in a card board box in the dead of winterOne day during this struggle to maintain life I made a choice that would forever change my life I grabbed my weapons and went to the closest bank I could find Storming through the door I ran up to the clerk and demanded all of their money She frantically stumbled around the bank scrounging up all the currency they had while I held everybody at gun point When she returned with the bag of money one of the citizens decided to be the hero and tried to rip the guns from me In the heat of the moment I turned and fired a single shot through his skull The blood sprayed everything within a five foot radius By this time the cops had just arrived and rushed into the building They seen the man falling to the ground and they returned fire on me Luckily the cops were horrible at shooting and none of the hundreds of bullets struck me I instinctively fired and killed all but one of the officers I awoke to find
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