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It was a hideous grotesque monster It was a demon sent from hell It was an alien from another planet It was as hairy as Bigfoot It was as bloody as an open wound Its cries were as loud as a siren It hurt to look at the repulsive beast It was Samuels new baby brotherThe town of Madeupville was a quiet place Until Nathan and his parents moved in Being the center of attention was hard work Getting everything you want doing whatever you want and always playing was exhausting Not that Samuel was complaining When he was told that he was going to be the second wheel he didnt take it well In his mind his parents were replacing him Samuel loved to be loved and it certainly didnt feel that way When his mother tried to console him he lashed out and screamed Sitting next to his parents in the car he learned a lot and he decided to use that knowledge nowDamn you to hell You dont love me anymore Im not going to sit around and let you replace me Ill run away Ill the 8 year old couldnt think of what to say But then the thought came to his mind Ill kill him if I have to His parents shrunk back in fear They knew that he meant it and they were afraid Let them be afraid Maybe theyll kill him so I dont have to Nathan didnt know what abortion was He didnt know what Hell was The 8 year old didnt know what anything he said actually meant What he did know was that his words made his parents afraid When his parents were afraid they did what he said He wasnt controlling he just told everyone what to do and they did it He gave one last order for the day I dont ever want to see him dismissed His parents filed into
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