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This morning was like any normal day trees rustling in the breeze traffic lights flashing people walking and driving to work In Brisbane City its very loud and noisy but when I parked my car and walked to the elevator ready to start the new day something felt different When I got to the eighth floor of the Suncorp Metway building where I work out of the corner of my eye I saw a bright yellow police barrier It was around what seemed to be blood and a knife This rattled me When it was my lunch break I got out of my office My desk was filled with stacked piles of paper My boss wanted to know why I didnt do any work I was too busy concentrating on the police and wondering what they were doing I went to investigate myself As soon as I reached the ground floor the secretary called out to me She was worried why my face was so pale You couldnt tell me from a glass of milk she said I looked at myself in the mirror My face was white and my lips were pink I felt like I was going to be sick I found a dark alley where I took shelter and tried to recover There was a god awful smell I looked down at my feet There was the grossest thing I have ever seen A DEAD BODY The body was bloody and armless as if a chainsaw had hacked it apart There was something peculiar about the corpse and the alley For a corpse with so much blood on it there wasnt much blood in the alley At that moment I remembered the police scene this morning It must have been a murder scene I suppose There was a knife and blood but no body I was freaked out about the dead body and police murder
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