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The entertainment for students or teens is an amusement park I been to Wet and Wild and Castles and Coasters All the rides splashing water eating everything you enjoy Relaxing in the water Yelling out of your minds Those two places might be enjoyable but another amusement park wouldnt hurt anyone Theres many reasons to build it here in phoenix but the main one is for we teens to have fun and enjoy Maybe that amusement park might be much better than the other twoThe Magic Carpet might look uninteresting even though it is fun This is one of the rides in Castles and Coasters Right away when I got on I had to find a seat Then seat down and wait for the man to turn it on Once he turns it on hell go slowly afterwards hell go faster and faster Then once it is time to get off I still felt like I was on the ride I rode that ride like 5 times Forgetting the best part the ride is all covered up see nothing and not even the person next to you Now the Desert Storm this is one of the fastest rides ever In this ride I did get sick but its the best one there When i got on all I did was enjoy the two minutes that the dragon will go slow I am afraid of heights so I was pretty scared Having this ride in the amusement park would make the park more interesting Even though some people might be afraid heights theyll like the ride While I was on this ride all I felt was butterflies in my stomach Afterward when I got off I felt like going on the ride againThe Tornado one of the craziest rides It is 160 foot tunnel Once I got on I sat down and relaxed for a minute Then I spinned around and around about 10 times
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