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The lunchroom that they met in was cold much too cold for December at least and Beth pulls her cashmere coat tightly around her small frame It was a gift from Cal two years ago A Christmas present she remembered God wont someone turn on the heat in here Wait no Beth dont ask it makes you look needy No shed rather be cold than complain to these people Theyd beckon to her wish of course because no one wants to upset Beth They think Im unstable She hated that part the most She didnt cry because that makes her vulnerable weak She shuddered She may have thought it was because she was cold but in the back of her mind she know that she only shuddered at the word weak Carole Lazenby PTA mommy-of-the-year called the attention all the parents who were in little cells some chatting about knitting or the weather some eating Nancy Hanleys delicious hors-dourves They were just cheese puffs Beth thought the classic white trash PTA middle of America food Im too good for cheese puffs Everyone took a seat Beth grabbed a chair and sat in the middle of the semi-circle of concerned parents Concerned parents are only concerned with looking concerned to other not-concerned parents she thought and almost giggled at its absurdity At first everyone talked about their children and their extra-curriculars harsh teachers grades etcetera Carole went first talking about how her little boy is starting to place first in swim practice how his Social Studies teacher is extra difficult this year failing him on an exam And that hes hardly keeping his A- grade afloat Boo-hoo-hoo Some mother of a new girl in town talked next She was petite and she spoke too fast She was nervous Beth youre never nervous At least not like her She chirps as she talks with ups and downs like a little redheaded roller coaster She mentions that her
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