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Dear Macbeth: You Didn't Deserve to Die

In this fictional letter, a student writes to Macbeth to argue that in spite of the murders he committed, he didn't deserve to die. The writer describes Macbeth's good traits and bad deeds and argues that Macbeth was ultimately corrupted by the prophecies of the witches as well as his wife's lust for power.
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Erin's feedback:

"What a clever approach to analyzing this play! While you do a good job of laying out your main ideas in the introduction, the first sentence is a little confusing. Usually, when you use a semicolon, you're connecting two closely related sentences. The semicolon there doesn't really convey how Macbeth's killing spree is related to his own death. A conjunction like "but" or "yet" would make that more clear. The tone here is a little conversational at times, but I think it works given that you're writing a letter and not a formal essay. There are just a few small punctuation and sentence structure errors to clean up before you submit this."

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