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I have been sitting in this lounge chair for over three hours maybe four I have been desperately trying to come up with something to write about for my next English assignment but I cannot concentrate because my brother will not stop blaring his stupid rap music It shouldnt even be called rap music because rap it not musicTURN THAT SHIT DOWN I get no response I said TURN IT DOWN NOW Again nothingWhat is with that kid Apparently I am the only one that can see my brother has been going off the deep end lately Oh course I am the only one that can tell because my mom and dad have been too preoccupied with each other to even notice if were alive All they do if fight especially over money You see my mother is what they call a trophy wife and my father rarely comes home from is job as a layer So usually its just Sam and I alone in our big empty house My little brother Sam is in his freshman year of high school now and I know I should be easier on him because he is just trying to find himself but come on Ive got important shit to do I thrust out of the lounge chair and I sound like an angry elephant storming towards his room down the hall The closer I get to his room the louder the music gets and the angrier I get I go to swing open his door with so much fury but it only budges an inch Sam open the door NothingSamThat kid is always blocking his doorway with a chair or some other random object to keep my parents or I out of his room Im so sick of this Sam When are you going to grow up With still no response I do what I always do call dadDadWhat is it Julie Im busyCan you come home
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