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"I found this essay well-written and compelling. Your points are clear and you do an excellent job of using examples to illustrate your points. In order to improve your grade, I would suggest editing or proofreading to ensure that your phrasing and punctuation is correct, and I would also challenge you to include a paragraph on what success isn't. Your notions of success run somewhat counter to the traditional narrative, and it's worth taking a few sentences to explain why you think being famous, for example, or being exorbitantly wealthy does not meet the definition of success. I think this would make your overall argument even more compelling. "
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