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Democracy in Ancient Greece

In this informative essay, the student discusses the development of democratic government in Ancient Greece. Discussing the other types of systems used to govern Greek city-states, the student explains how democracy was and continues to be a much better system.
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Natalie's feedback:

"Ancient Greece is such an interesting subject, and we certainly owe a lot to those who pioneered democracy! All in all, you did a good job on this essay. You stayed focused on the topic at hand and spoke at length about specific examples. One of my suggestions would definitely be to work on writing a proper introduction and conclusion, in addition to watching out for spelling and grammar mistakes (which were very minor throughout, but are still important). You also indicated the style as being MLA, which would mean that your formatting needs a little revision. If you're not sure how to do this, there are several online resources that can be found by simply searching "MLA style guide." Overall, you did well and with these few fixes you'll have a great paper!"

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