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I had just moved into my new house and now go to a new school and so far everything was perfect until lunch time when I was having a meal with my new friends asked me where did I lived I told him the address and my friends all stared at me They managed to spit out that the house opposite of my house is haunted Then they explained if you look at the attic at the dead of the night you can see two bright red lights I was just thinking to myself was this one of their jokes or are they telling the truth When I went back to home that night I was still very curious in what they said That night at midnight my alarm woke me up I didnt put the alarm on Before I went back to sleep I decided to glance out of the window and then I saw the two red bright eyes staring into my eyes and then suddenly it was gone I went to sleep trying not to think about what I saw Finally I managed to go to sleep The next day I went to school and told my friends what I saw They were also horrified even though they told me about it When I arrived home late that night my mum told me You are going to the opposite house with your older brother to clean up the attic and the kitchen A chill went down my spine and with all the horror I managed to say Why do we need to go She answered me telling me Its a special favor from the opposite house My brother and I made our way to the opposite house I didnt tell him about the story of the red eyes He opened the door and found the switch to the lights and the whole place illuminated The place was crystal clean at the hall
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