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It was a rather long ten minutes sitting in the passenger seat of my brothers jeep watching headlights of the passing cars get thicker and closer and then brighter but what went on in those ten very simple minutes is something that I will remember forever It was a conversation with my oldest brother who for the last four years has been working as a waiter never gaining the strength or motivation to go back and finish college It happened about 2 years ago when I was still in high school and doing fairly well and I was a very impressionable person especially to my brother whom I knew had experienced many more things than I did He has made a lot of mistakes failing out of college his freshman year and in the subsequent years not working hard enough Yet he does have very intriguing and important advice I guess you could say he learned from his own mistakes but could never follow his own advice And that is what made me so unwary as to what he told me At that time I wasnt sure what to believe but now I think I agree with everything he had to say My brother was the type of person who you knew was intelligent and could make it in the real world but never could apply himself and do the work He was lazy Yet its not really a physical laziness but more of a mental one He as much as anyone else enjoyed going out with his friends to parties or as he got older to bars and have a good time and relax But he did this often and probably too often His first year at college was spent in England where he subsequently failed to make any of his classes and thus flunked out His second semester was spent roaming around Europe I am not sure if he returned
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