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Audience Teen-Adult Purpose To entertain NARRATIVEDESCRIPTIVE ESSAY As his senses returned to him the world around him was a blur although he could make out the familiar red velvet curtains in the bay window and the polished wooden floor of his 2 million home His doctor wandered in as he rubbed his eyes and stretched his lanky body My bike he queried groggily What happened to it Jon Jon Jon whatve you done to yourself this time Mmmy bike Jon yawned incoherently rubbing his tired eyes Your bikes gone Jon and frankly you should be focusing on more important things The companys going down hill and fast Jons brother and co founder of the HATRIX Empire strode into the room his face like thunder Youre the face of the company Jon you need to be out there heading the company Now now Mr Knight Jon here needs his rest hes only just woken up and you shouldnt be barging in here Jons doctor began before being cut off abruptly by Knight I didnt ask you did I Jon has to work I know his families gone but that was a month ago you need to get over it He began again in a more calculated yet more patronising tone Jon you might as well put your whole effort into the company seeing as your familys gone what else are you going to do bike riding He spat out the last words in disgust Knight was the kind of man that believed in money Money bought happiness and as much money as you had you could always make more and more and more He didnt approve of Jon and even with Jons family gone instead of working longer he had decided to follow one of his obscene pastimes bike riding leaving the company to fend for itself Of course he felt for Jon to an extent family gone and all that but Jon was
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