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On a beautiful Friday morning I woke up to my German shepherd drenching my face in saliva I pushed him off my face giggling saying Lucky stop Right after I wiped my face on my sleeve I took a big stretch and jumped out of bed I hear my mom yell through my room intercom James Breakfast is ready I walked out of the room and I said Good Morning to the maid her name was Cindy Such a sweet woman I went in the shower or I would say my thinking station and reminisce on my life I thought about how bored I was no girlfriend no friends I was a very different 22 years old I wasnt a social network junkie like the rest of the young adults my age I felt like social networks was a race to show who has the most perfect life Women also came by the flocks in my life no one of any value just a bunch of now moment women People would probably portray my life as perfect amazing the American dream Those that might not know me would probably assume Im spoiled ignorant or cocky but I felt I was far from it Guys my age were only about money cars and partying Things that really didnt hold any value to me I was more of the Business type I could talk about Business or Real Estate all day All these about me go through my head a lot of times in the shower As I stepped out the shower I hear Dads bright yellow car start up from the driveway Some kids my age would probably call Dads car cool or awesome I just thought it was annoyingly loud I got downstairs and mom made my favorite egg whites
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