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Differences Between Friendships and Parent/Child Relationships

This is an essay that consists of the answers to two prompts about parenting. First, the author had to identify the differences between parent/child relationships and friendship that Joseph Kupher felt existed. Second, the author had to express whether they felt that Kupher or Kristjansson had a better view and why.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You have done a good job addressing both questions in a logical manner. For the first question, you included both an introduction and a conclusion giving the essay direction and summarizing it nicely. You also did a good job providing evidence to support your position. There are a number of spacing, punctuation, and grammar issues that are impacting readability. The second essay does not have a structured introduction, so if the question was removed it would not be as clear what the goal of the essay is. Once again, you included a significant amount of evidence to support your position and ended it was a conclusion that is a good summary of the main points in the essay. Grammar and word choice issues need to be resolved with a round of proofreading."

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