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Does the Existence of Ejidos Help with Economic and Social Reform?

This essay is about the Spanish conquest and the ownership of land. More specifically, the author goes into detail about ejidos, Indian villages that had communal land systems.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Not sure what I'd do without @Kibin
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Jenn's feedback:

"Your paper is excellently written. The only thing that needs improvement is its organization, and all rest will fall into place. You have not included either an introduction or a conclusion. Both of these pieces are essential to the organization of an essay. An introduction should consist of a small amount of background information about your topic and should end with a thesis statement that identifies the points you will write about and why. The body of the paper should then align with the thesis statement. To end your essay, you should write a conclusion that summarizes your points and relates them to the thesis statement. This will make the purpose of your paper clear and will show the reader that you remained focused on that purpose throughout your writing. Both the content and conventions of your essay are excellent. Since you used so much factual information, I advise you to include in-text citations and a reference page to avoid potential plagiarism issues. You can resolve a few basic convention errors throughout your writing with a round of proofreading. The formatting is the other part of your paper that needs the most work. I recommend you present the presidents in a paragraph rather than in a list format."

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