Domestic Abuse: Understanding How to Avoid this Major Problem in Society
This problem/solution essay discusses domestic abuse and how people have found themselves in positions to experience this difficult issue. The student also reflects on a project proposal to help bring awareness to domestic violence through an intersectional lens.
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"Your essay is off to a good start with good information about the causes of domestic abuse interspersed with your own observations and reflections. That being said, the paper does go back and forth quite a bit from reflection and presenting information on the topic in a way that's slightly confusing to the reader. In your first paragraph, you focus on your project specifically, but there are things you discuss that your reader isn't privy to, like the "pictures" you mention in the fifth sentence. You might consider re-organizing the essay to follow a more logical flow. At times, the diction and word choices feel a bit off, and there are some grammar and punctuation errors in the essay as well. Proofreading your essay and reading it out loud can help resolve these issues. Be sure that you're including a Works Cited list since you've included in-text citations."
Kibin. (2023). Domestic abuse: understanding how to avoid this major problem in society. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/domestic-abuse-understanding-how-to-avoid-this-major-problem-in-society-FFWrlvz9
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("Domestic Abuse: Understanding How to Avoid this Major Problem in Society.")
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"Domestic Abuse: Understanding How to Avoid this Major Problem in Society." Kibin, 2023. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/domestic-abuse-understanding-how-to-avoid-this-major-problem-in-society-FFWrlvz9.
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