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It was a cold winter night and Donyay was at my house Everyone wasasleep and he remembered that I had a BB gun in my gun closet Hethought it would be fun to go outside and start shooting random thingsSo he and I put our jackets jeans and shoes on and went out and shotmany things on streets We went down Tremper Avenue and started shootingstop signs and many other things then we reached a bridge that was nextto Dunkin Donuts on Broadway We both decided that we would stand on theleft corner of the bridge facing traffic and shoot cars that came by As we took turns I hit a red pickup truck and a little blue car on theside Donyay shot a black car and a tractor trailer we made jokes aboutthe Police coming and taking only one of us and the other one could justwalk awayAs we were making jokes in the dark on the bridge and bright lightbeamed on us and all we could see was red and blue lights surroundingus I realized that I had done something stupid the officer asked ournames ages and address We waited for 3 minutes when a lady came out ofa black car When Donyay shot the womans car it hit her windshield andshe called the police Listening to the officers conversation with Donyay he said He waswalking by and saw that I was shooting cars and he had tried to stop mewhen the officer was arriving I realized then that he wasnt a friendbut a person that was playing me so he wouldnt get in trouble Theofficer put me in the back of his car while he talked to Donyay and thenme We were both brought home him first then me My Mom was waiting for meon the porch She didnt look happy at all I Realized what I did and Istarted to cry and beg her forgiveness It took a while and many
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