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Drinking I think we all or most have experienced it I think the drinking age should stay at the age of 21 instead of being lowered The reason my opinion changed is because I see too many people my age making poor decisions and cannot control themselves I think at this age many of us are mature but not enough when alcohol is involved Im not going to go out and fight the law because Id rather have it younger because I am not 21 but it shouldnt be anything less Were in college and to add to that the number one party school in America From the parties we went too and then the memories that were made Getting drunk and doing stupid things like vandalism driving disturbing others Waking up the next morning and laughing about what happened Or how somebody was throwing up all night next to the toilet and fell asleep in the bathroom They are great times to sit back and enjoy with your friends and even sometimes family but it caught my attention that so many people I knew at these parties and gatherings acted so much different when drunk and sober People in high school that are yelling at other people on the top of their lungs throwing stuff at peoples houses destroying the inside of their houses Some may not think they have had too much to drink and attempt to drive That makes them at a higher chance of getting into an accident and hurting others Another is possibly getting arrested for acting dumb in public Barely able to walk on the sidewalk throwing up in public bothering othersyelling at people Some people our age can drink responsibly but then you have the people that drink to drink and to get drunk That purely just drink to get drunk Some cant control their drinking and end up getting their stomachs pumped or known as alcohol poisoning
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