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The virginity is something that is supposed to be sacred A teens first time can have many different effects Some may be negative and some positive but all arelife changing Your task while revising for the final draft is to revise the sentences so they exclude the inefficient words in yellow This will lead to more efficient writing which will allow you to add more detail from the sourcesIn the beginning virginity was seen as innocent purity and freedom from sexual desire now it is seen as a negative thing Even though manyteenagers sexual decisions are said to be based on their religion church attendance does not affect virginity loss A lot of variables can influence a teens first sexual encounter like strategic orientation parents overall education risk orientation family satisfaction if the biological family is intact dating behavior and other schoolmates sexual behavior When teens first have sex it is usually to maintain a valuable relationship CitationsNew paragraphThe different types of virginity status during sexual experience are as follows delayers have not had sex and are not in a hurry to Anticipators have not had sex but want to One-timers have had sex only once and regret it or do not have the opportunity at intercourse again Steadies have had sex with multiple times with one person exclusively Multiples have had sex with multiple people in different relationships Once sexual activity starts it usually continues The cost for sexual intercourse is not only physical but psychological and social The physical risks are pregnancy and STDs which is increasing because teens are actively seeking sexual relationshipsnot really increasing unless you look at distorted picture The United States has the highest rate of pregnancy even though we have low-cost and easy access to contraception Birth control is more likely to be used by non-pledgers then by people who pledge abstinence This occurs because pledgers do not plan their first sexual experience which means they have
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