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Biography of Marguerite de Navarre and Information on Miroir de l’ame pecheresse

In this informative essay, a student pretends to be Marguerite de Navarre and shares her life story. The student explains how Marguerite’s family dynamics influenced the creation of one of her most notable works: Miroir de l’ame pecheresse (Mirror of the Sinful Soul).
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Angela's feedback:

"It’s clear that you’ve done your research, and you do a good job of writing Marguerite de Navarre’s biography from her perspective. However, you have a tendency to place commas where they’re not needed (e.g., in the phrases “being, mother” and “France, and died”). The title of a long poem should be italicized, and it is odd to refer to a poem as “one of the most important figures.” Moreover, the sentence that begins “The years to come” is especially awkward and would benefit from revision for clarity. The particle “de” associated with Marguerite de Navarre’s name is typically lowercased, and review is needed to ensure the beginning of a sentence is always capitalized. You should also check for accurate treatment of Charles IV’s name and title. Sources listed in the works cited section should feature hanging indents instead of block formatting."

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