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There I was enjoying my holiday in our families holiday flat Things couldnt get better until 2 girls moved into the flat above ours I soon introduced myself find out their names were Julie and Katherine who were both the same age as me 14 I immediately developed a huge liking to Julie After a few sessions of chatting I presumed that Katherine and Julie were sisters Before things could really get going Katherine and Julie had to return to their house in Durban I couldnt get Julie off my mind I was SO keen for her After abit of investigating I found out Katherine surname I looked up the surname and got the phone number After brewing up all my courage I picked up the phone and decided to phone Julie Katherines sister Hi Julie its Len how are you Len Whos that Remember from Umm sortof I couldnt understand it Had she forgotten who I was I came to the conclusion that she was only joking around with me After having a regular conversation about what we had been and are going to doetc I had to try my luck into getting our relationship onto the next level So Julie we must goto a movie or something next time we see each other in Umm okay I was extatic - The girl that I had been constantly thinking about now agreed to go on a date with me I phoned my good friend Cuan who had just returned from an overseas holiday to tell him the good news Cuan goes to the same school as Julie and Katherine and as soon as I had finished telling him the entire story he packed up in histerical laughter After about 10 minutes when his laughter had settled he explained to me the crucial information I was missing Julies real name is Catherine and she is not Katherines sister but Katherines best friend Perhaps Catherine
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