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My little family of four was compressed into a tiny spaceship withabout 2000 other people all of us were nervous and scared It was 3024and World War IV was raging on Jorge Miradez who was trying to kill allthe families of veterans for they prevented him from winning World WarIII These families were making a break for it by heading to a planet inthe solar system They would not know what planet they were on untilthey arrived The whereabouts of where we were headed had to remainsecret so information could not be discovered this secrecy filled mewith despair because my father was kidnapped and place in Miradezs BootCamp The camp was designed after concentration camps in World War II Ifelt like Anne Frank being forced into secret hidingVivianna Luke my five year old brother whispered his voice shakingwith fear We are about to land Lukie do not be afraid we are safe and God is helping us I saidpulling him in to a tight embrace and told him not to worry Then Igathered up Mia my baby sister who was sleeping soundly on the cot weshared I quickly put on my coat and began helping Mia and Luke do thesame I held my squeezed Lukes hand held Mia tighter and held mybreath as we began to descend on to our new homeThe shuttle landed with an exclamatory bang as it settled into thegroundWe could not exit immediately because the pilots had to place theCarbon Dioxide convertors at the campsite They were a very neatcontraption that allowed us to breath The worked like a fan but insteadof taking in hot air and pushing out cold air the convertors took inCO2 and transformed it into oxygen They were about 45 of thecontraptions around the camp Everybody also had a handheld on in casethey wanted to explore the planet After about an hour of waiting anxiously we were finally permitted toleave the shuttle I stepped out
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