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Standing with my fingers crossed arms folded and eyes on the clock I waited in line as the numbers were slowly being called to the front desk of the University of Guam Admissions Records Office I stood there hoping and praying that by the time they called my number Id get the results of my placement I was hoping for I waited and waited but my number was never called By the time I felt like my legs needed a break a lady wearing a green collared UOG t-shirt screamed out number 18 That was my number Pull yourself together Kia just ask repeated in the back of my mind as my shaky foot stepped towards the desk in front of me With a deep breath can I please know my scores for my placement test And that was it In just a matter of seconds I was out the door the wind blew strong taking my self-esteem with itI didnt think a piece of paper other than a price tag could do so much damage As I read the results over and over again MA085 non-credited EN100 non-credited repeatedly echoed in the back of my head It wasnt just one but two non-credited classes I texted my scores to my two older sisters and just as I expected they were dissatisfied I couldnt blame them I was the one at fault For a few days I would tell no one of my scores I would immediately change the subject Everywhere I went it seemed as if I was playing hide-and-seek with the subject of placement scores and I just kept losing I couldnt converse with ease every time someone would bring it up It felt like it made me weaker I just couldnt snap out of it Only a few people noticed something different about me I knew it wasnt obvious because I was pretty good at that Hiding stuff I definitely was
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