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Examining the History and Ethical Nature of Cloning

This essay is about cloning. The author was explicitly tasked with communicating whether they believe that the cloning of humans should be allowed. The author discussed movies that exhibit cloning, such as Star Wars and Avatar and actual cases of cloning, such as the sheep named Dolly in the United States and monkeys named Hua Hua and Zhong Zhong in China. Ian Wilmut was responsible for Dolly and used Somatic Cell Nuclear Transfer. This case led to controversies, and the National Bioethics Advisory Commission became involved. Finally, the author reviewed the ethics of cloning from the Christian, teleology, and deontology perspectives.
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"You have done an excellent job with this paper. You have written a clear and detailed thesis statement that communicates the document's purpose, and the body of your paper aligns with the thesis statement showing that your writing is focused. The content of your article is also excellent. You have elaborated well on your points and supported them with factual information followed by in-text citations. There is one place where a paragraph does end with an incomplete sentence.

I have a couple of suggestions regarding the organization and the formatting. First, I think that the conclusion could use a bit of elaboration. In comparison with the rest of the paper, it does not seem as developed. You also noted that your essay is supposed to be MLA styled. I would double-check your in-text citations and references to make sure everything is formatted correctly.

Last, you have an excellent command of grammar, sentence structure, and punctuation. There are a few errors scattered throughout that you may be able to catch by using the editor function in your word processing software."

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