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Exploring The Gender Wage Gap

This paper is about the gender wage gap and reasons why it exists. The author discusses ethnicity, demeanor, motherhood, and pay transparency as just a few of the factors that have led to a gender wage gap.
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Jenn's feedback:

"This essay is off to a good start. You have made the subject of the essay clear and provided a lot of evidence to support your position. Despite the clear use of evidence, there are no citations and there is no Work Cited page. There are a lot of punctuation issues throughout your document, some of which are most noticeable around your quotes. You need to add a comma after the quote introduction and place the ending sentence punctuation within the quotation marks. There is also a lack of commas after introductory phrases. There are many places throughout your essay where it feels like you are just writing a list of facts rather than creating a story. To fix this, you need to create transitions between sentences. There are also a large number of grammatical errors that significantly impact the ease of readability. It would benefit your document if you made the introduction and conclusion more concise. They should be limited to summarizing what you are going to talk about in the text or what you talked about in the text rather than adding facts that need to be cited."

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